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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2006-11-20 12:29 PM


i watched as we made love in the trees
i remember watching as our hair
whipped in the breeze
me wrapped in you warm embrace
blocking the chill that
seeped through my lace
you devouring every morsal
of our passion
gaurding our love from
the flames of the dragons
breathing you in
exhaling you out
giving up now
you are my lover
with out a doubt



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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-20 12:38 PM


There is no doubt I liked this

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2006-11-20 01:19 PM


Thank you you are too sweet.....

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-20 09:05 PM


beautiful

A poem begins with a lump in the throat.
~Robert Frost

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-20 09:46 PM


ms angel, your binding here was captivating, enjoyed it
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