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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-11-20 08:56 AM



Subliminal Change

Tell me this,
Of the slings and arrows sent your way
What part you capture in dismay

Is not the finger pointed out,
The claim a victim states in doubt?

Speak to me,
Of times now past
Your reaction, what you did last

Is not the most profound to heal
In recognition, what we feel…now?

Talk to me of what we do,
When once again, these tender few
Revisit future times in you

Is not the means to simply state
What happened then, the best relate
Identified with its effect, the very core of disrespect?

Is not the truth to liberate
Without control to demonstrate the new?
Is not the finger pointed out,
The claim a victim states in doubt, we do?

Copyright Kkh 11/20/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2006-11-20 05:30 PM


Strong questions awaiting answers...  You
do have a way with pinning things down.

wredgranny
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2 posted 2006-11-20 05:47 PM


Is not the truth to liberate
Without control to demonstrate the new?
Is not the finger pointed out,
The claim a victim states in doubt, we do?

Siyo ThisDiamond a soul questions itself just so,seeking answers it already knows.Still we wonder to ourself in doubt good enough,or wanting still? Sigi for making me to remember questions are good medicine for learning!


  granny!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-11-20 08:45 PM


I am just moved by this!

wow!

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2006-11-21 08:51 AM


grand title...a 'write' that presents so very, very much to think quite carefully about!

"Speak to me,
Of times now past''''

....Is not the most profound to heal
    In recognition, what we feel...now?"

The past is, of course, irrevocable...the future as yet powerless to be born....only the 'NOW' contains our only clay of infinite sparkling potentialities!

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-11-21 03:04 PM




"Tell me this,
Of the slings and arrows sent your way
What part you capture in dismay"

I'm still stuck
thinking about this one

great work TD

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