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JLHunter
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0 posted 2006-11-20 07:02 AM


Winter Chills

Winter assails me.
Blustery winds break my heart
As our love grows cold.



I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-20 07:14 AM


and sometimes it's the wind that hurts more
JLHunter
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2 posted 2006-11-20 08:48 AM


Hi, Shadows.

It ALL hurts!  I want pain-free love, but it's a poet's dream, I'm afraid.

Thanks for writing.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-11-20 09:37 AM


This is a good American Senryu.

JLHunter
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4 posted 2006-11-20 10:11 AM


Right you are, Interloper.  I did it again!  Oh, well.  Everyone is entitled to many, many mistakes.  Or is that just me?



John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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