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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2006-11-19 02:11 AM


In judgment sin is imperfection, but
isn't it  beingness in experience?
The whole creation by definition
                   is 'sin'!
If we admit that creation is imperfect
(sin is found in it: vice, violence, death)
In judgment we must condemn creation
and that which created, which is called God!

For God created all things good
yet bad they went, then worse
so they say, so we observe.
But we're also told nothing exists
that God did not create!
We're also told that we ourselves
are but the pure image of our Maker!
Let's follow this simple thought
to some logical conclusion
and see where that leaves us.

The people who wrote the Bible
never intended to demonstrate
this undeniable truth:
that God is the Prime Mover of Sin
yet no other conclusion
may be drawn from their record.
           “Your witness!”

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
themute
Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
1 posted 2006-11-19 03:50 AM


Beloved, writhe in ecstacy whilst your spirit, mind, and thoughts are engulfed in chaos. The beauty of which is indescribable in its very palpabily, truly infinite.  Contradictions: only words make contradictions, god is above your good and evil, sin and justice. God is above them because god is both good and evil and sin and justice. God is the two sided coin, to deny one side is to deny the whole. Speek to me never more of god, you belittle infinity, you belittle truth, you belittle love, you belittle yourself.    
wredgranny
Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493
Ky. USA
2 posted 2006-11-19 12:09 PM


In judgment sin is imperfection, but
isn't it  beingness in experience?
The whole creation by definition
                   is 'sin'!
If we admit that creation is imperfect
(sin is found in it: vice, violence, death)
In judgment we must condemn creation
and that which created, which is called God!

For God created all things good
yet bad they went, then worse
so they say, so we observe.
But we're also told nothing exists
that God did not create!
We're also told that we ourselves
are but the pure image of our Maker!
Let's follow this simple thought
to some logical conclusion
and see where that leaves us.

The people who wrote the Bible
never intended to demonstrate
this undeniable truth:
that God is the Prime Mover of Sin
yet no other conclusion
may be drawn from their record.
           “Your witness!”

Siyo Windwalker in the teachings of my grandmothers First Man and First Woman were greatly loved by Creator,and so given the "choice" of good and evil. Creator gave to us the greatest of chances to help each other,gifts of great beauty to make Mother Earth the perfect home.People decide they are creators as well,jealous of all they see,wishing greedily to "own"and control.It is not Creator I think to blame,but the greedy hearts of People!
Aisv Nv Wadohivnv!


  granny!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-11-19 11:30 PM



this is indeed a very interesting poem WindWalker
I enjoyed it

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2006-11-20 09:36 PM


When you write in this alternative thought, I feel so much power of the rushing mind.
So good to read your thoughts here WW.

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