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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-17 07:16 AM



you did the spray on hello high
tan kind of candy with freckles
and a hand shake kind of kiss

I didn't look at your eyes
I knew how deep they would go
and that the drowning was one way

with no return from wanting to
but you said something clever
that ruined my presentation

something about paper bag hearts
that anyone can kick through
if they are willing to do the ruin

and will keep the pretty pieces after

_________

daark

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-11-17 08:45 AM


a lesson of awareness so brilliantly written across the heavens of time...astute and thought provoking...


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-17 09:02 AM


ms lee j, thanks lady!!
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-11-17 10:43 AM


You know, the title just charmed me and the poem gripped me.  Well, you already know I am a fan - but did you know that I like paper over plastic?  Seriously, I look forward to reading your poetry every morning.

Thank you.
az

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-17 10:54 AM


ms az, thank you and I like paper too.
Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2006-11-17 11:24 AM


there you go again!!!! Don't stop.....

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-17 11:36 AM


ms angel, my favorite words, thank you ms
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-11-17 02:29 PM




Stranger darlin'
it had to be pretty clever
to ruin your presentation...

good one


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-11-17 03:22 PM


ladyone, I knew she was lyin when I saw her lips move, but I pretended to listen anyway...love is deaf yes?  thanks hon
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