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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-11-17 01:46 AM


Love Endures

Shards of love broke off my heart
As I turned my back
and walked away.
They splintered in the prism of light
that shone from
the frosty window.
Hundreds of jewels of frozen tears
lay at my feet and
halted my retreat.
I knelt in the moonlight shadows
and welded them,
never to break again.
The strength of love to forever endure.

aziza

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-11-17 07:09 AM


ms az, love is eternal
it is just the skins that change..enjoyed this

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-11-17 08:42 AM


yes, love is eternal, like D. said, and it is certainly not for self gratification, but more so, to realize, love's trials and tribulations, mature reasoning, and desire to go the distance no matter what.  Love is surely a work in progress and maybe that is the purpose....our purpose.  
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-11-17 09:30 AM


M'dear, not only are you a fine poetess, you truly do have the soul of one as well.

May your heart remain intact, forever more!

Warm hug,
EA

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-11-17 10:50 AM


Thank you.

And, yes, love is forever.  It just grows and blossoms if we let it.

xoxoxo
A

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-11-17 12:08 PM


the winter looks good on you
HopeS
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6 posted 2006-11-17 12:16 PM


yes it withstands the test of time

Hope

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