Without You - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #39

Without You

nikiah87
New Member

since 2006-06-22

Posts 8
Indiana

0 posted 2006-11-16 11:19 AM

I don't know if you still love me,
I don't know if you even care.
I know that living without you,
Would be to much to bare.

You say that you still like me,
But yet I'm still confused.
One too many times though,
You've left my heart abused.

See I'm still in love with you,
But baby you make it tough.
Cuz seeing you with her,
Man, all this is rough.

The only thing left to do,
Is give up on it all.
Get rid of you completely,
Avoid your every call.

**Ashlee**

Please let me know what you think!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-11-16 02:34 PM

I think you write
from your heart Ashlee
and I think it's hurting right now
well done

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-11-17 11:15 PM

Nice...when they're with someone else, they are going on with their life...
we become number two or three in importance...acceptance is important...what do I know...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-11-18 12:41 PM

love the strength at the end there

I know how much this hurts

nikiah87
New Member

since 2006-06-22

Posts 8
Indiana

4 posted 2006-11-20 10:05 AM

Thank you guys for taking the time to read my poem. Your right--it did hurt and now i've moved on. Thanks again.

Ashlee

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.