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You Asked (rictameter for Loper)
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You Asked (rictameter for Loper) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You asked For more whispers Of romantic notions Passionate cries settle on ears Soothing thoughts of these softest moments held Quelling the need within spirits Tender exchange of soul For you, because You asked. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-16-2006 12:01 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! An early Christmas present  This is 1derful and  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Christmas presents come early to some...  Lovely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Quelling the need within spirits Tender exchange of soul For you, because you asked marvelous prose a happy read |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh Donna, this is nicely done! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Very well done!  Omnia vincit amor |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh it's just lovely Donna |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey ya'll!! Blame Loper for this one.  your kind replies bless me, many, many thanks for the words. |
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