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The Lady
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The Southwest

0 posted 2006-11-16 01:20 AM




when first my feet touch beach sand  
gritty between bare toes  
and amber eyes meet amber eyes  
it is your face I will touch  
the hollow between nose and mouth  
the place you were angel kissed at birth  
I will wait
for arms to hold me  
fit top of head  
under your chin
ear to chest
listen for your blood    
no kiss  
this passion is too deep for kiss
this passion longs for
hold

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-11-16 07:13 AM


ladyone, this soft side of your fragile
is shimmering with glow...enjoyed you this way

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-11-16 07:27 AM


ah, how beautiful

a theme close to my heart

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-11-16 08:04 AM


softly beautiful, Kate.  
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-11-16 08:08 AM


Lady
Softly, softly blows the wind.

Decaflame
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5 posted 2006-11-16 09:22 AM



Oh, just this, indeed.

Keep penning favorites, Lady...




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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-11-16 09:34 AM


Gentle hugs...
perfect preamble
I think I'm inspired

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pressie
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7 posted 2006-11-16 10:25 AM


"the hollow between nose and mouth  
the place you were angel kissed at birth"

Well done my lady!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-11-16 03:33 PM



Stranger darlin’
this soft side of my fragile
thinks about love a lot…

thank you so much Dixie

thank you gentle Donna  

awww Sir Sy
I love the kiss  
thank you

Decaflame
thank you kindly


thank you for the hugs
Interloper  
  

Pressie  
thank you so much


Enchantress
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9 posted 2006-12-11 04:49 PM


Oh my this is SO beautiful!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-12-11 09:12 PM


very beautiful write   RDB
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2006-12-12 06:27 PM


Nice...James
MoonShadow
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12 posted 2007-03-12 04:51 PM



   "for arms to hold me  
   fit top of head  
   under your chin
   ear to chest
   listen for your blood"

   Such passion would make the blood rush, the heart beat so fast as to surely melt, and the souls to warm exquisitely and blissfully to meld one to the other. An infinately beautiful write, Milady that captivates, enchants and leaves one wanting for more of the same... 'this passion'.

          MoonShadow
.    

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-03-12 07:38 PM




this passion is deep Sir Moonshadow

how deep I know not yet

thank you

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