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marcel
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0 posted 2006-11-15 10:23 PM



Loneliness


When there is that quiet contentment
Or that solemn self-sensual solitude
As seen from cloud crowned mountains
And the endless rims of ancient oceans
There must be cause to ponder the prose
Of the most loved of Angels and poets
Penning the pain and love of dreamers
Wanting what the heart rarely realizes
But in expression and visions so surreal
The writ only of fantasies induced by delusions
In a place weepers lay their heads
Awakening from the dead flower’s scent
And the touch and embrace of a cheating lover
From which innocence freezes then unfreezes
Much like heartbreak and infatuation
Under the shade of the moon kissing the sun
Most beautiful to the blind yearning to make reason
Of circumstances and the secret to the seemingly blessed
And the non-inclusive souls that invisibly pray
For the strength to do right by the righteous
Instead of doing selfish for self-fulfillment and preservation
Written on the hearts of souls of sinners
To be read only when that special place is reached
A haven of golden heavens and silver paradises
When the limits of reality extend beyond comfort
And tears drown the lost in darkness and pain
Leaving the newly awakened in humble serenity
Among thoughts, loneliness and the love of God.


Marcel


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-11-15 10:46 PM


Soulful, in the pale shadows of half lit surf.  Beautifully written.
TD

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2006-11-19 02:49 PM


Back topside with this!

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