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journie
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since 2006-11-13
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0 posted 2006-11-15 11:45 AM


Vagabond clothes and tears in your hose.
Wearing a red stocking cap against an orange over rap.
Pulling clothes out one by one just to make sure they are done.
Studying the vending machine to see if your quarter will retrieve the simple prize that lay inside.
Stuffing your clothes in garbage bags with a cigar hanging from your mouth.
You throw them in your pull along cart and disappeared into the dark.


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gypsyheartx
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since 2006-02-09
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Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland
1 posted 2006-11-15 03:18 PM


I love the imagery in this Very nice...

~Miranda~

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-11-15 03:50 PM


a true snapshot
for I have seen her
through your words
and in the city

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-11-15 04:00 PM


A sad, yet captivating, vignette of a vagabond woman.

Loving Light,

Earth Angel

DreamerSpirit
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4 posted 2006-11-15 04:05 PM


i loved reading this..it's very nice.

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