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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma 
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When stretching 'what is' along a line, You find that the line is all of time, A panoramic photo of its kind, Which is not simply a point on the line, It is a snapshot of all that's called time: 'From the original conception burst, An incomprehensible charging surge, Triggering the Genesis Second Hand, From infinity's asylum of naught, To discover it is the first Tick-Tock: The Alpha of a zillion clicks unlocked, Marching to a perfect cadence clock, Without the tiniest-second thought. Joining in a slow dance with déjà vu, Echoing a Two-step forever tune, But suddenly, the ages old recite Still frames the stunned afternoon, Freezing the phase of the moon; Alarmed by the shocking sight, Gasping at the inscribed sign: -It Is The End Of The Line-.' Omnia vincit amor |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to PiP...please check your email!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pressie...An interesting thing to think and write about, time. Welcome to Passions!  |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Poet deVine, Thank you so much for the wonderful card! I know that I will love it here. Omnia vincit amor TP |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Martie, Yes, time truly is an intriguing subject, and one of my favorite things to think about. Thanks for the kind welcome! Omnia vincit amor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome rhyme scheme! I love this! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
passing shadows, Again, thanks for the encouraging words. "And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very interesting entrance piece. I'm sure you will enjoy yourself here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Nancy, Thanks for the welcome! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I can see we're going to love you Pressie welcome! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
The Lady, Your a real sweetheart. Thanks for the welcome! Omnia vincit amor |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this .. Welcome to the blue pages You will like it here! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thanks for the welcome Interloper! I'm dining at the banquet now. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Much enjoyed, Pressie. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Sunshine, Thank you for the kind welcome and the the great card! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I had missed your first post. Yes, time is a constant, it has been there from the begining and will be there to the end. Enjoyed the view through your words. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thank you Gentle Spirit for taking the journey with me. Ah..to contemplate the ebb and flow of time. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Welcome to passions.....this is beautiful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Angel4aKing & Nightshade, Thanks for the wonderful welcome! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to Passions! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
SmartChick, Thank you for the welcome! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Without the tiniest-second thought. Joining in a slow dance with déjà vu, Echoing a Two-step forever tune, But suddenly, the ages old recite Still frames the stunned afternoon, Freezing the phase of the moon; Alarmed by the shocking sight, Gasping at the inscribed sign: -It Is The End Of The Line-.' Howa! Sigi,you have capture the feeling I face each year at the time of my childs crossing.The ticking clock so unforgiving,the memories as well,the shock that washes over you as the law man comes to tell! my heart thanks you!
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A great piece of writing Pressie, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
wredgranny I am so sorry for your loss.  I can't imagine how you must feel. Your words are a special encouragement to me! I pray that you will find peace in the midst of the sorrow. Maranatha TP |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Steve, Thanks for the kind words! Boomer Sooner! |
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