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Open Poetry #39

the strange attractor!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-11-15 12:23 PM

            TIME!

   TIME   is  a   whirlpool
   a      confused      mix
   of illusions and reality
   that    draws us    into
   I  N  F  I   N  I   T  Y

  [although it has been said,
   of course, that ‘reality’
    is only for those who
      lack imagination!]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2006-11-15 12:26 PM

I apologize in advance to everyone....
that the final positioning of the text
of this poem was NOT as I had actually
intended (nor as I had typed it into
the message box when posting this!]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-11-15 07:26 AM

much enjoyed, text in the right place or not

Marge is a wizard at doing text shape stuff...she might help you out

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-11-15 09:16 AM

I like the thought of this piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-11-15 11:51 PM

very well done poet...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-11-16 10:39 AM

cyclonic
natures
pull
you
in
!

I know....I know
perhaps just my
perspective
on time's
travel

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2006-11-16 07:07 PM

I liked this one alot....take care

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2006-11-17 10:05 AM

secondhanddreampoet

Change is the whip
Time is the chip

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