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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-14 07:13 AM


some times I imagine you
wearing the gypsy of a chill
something clinging

that the wind blows around
til it is inside out almost

you climb the tree of me then
unsteady in your ascending
finding places for your feet

and embracing with your arms
hoping to fall fast enough

for the friction to warm you
but not falling at all
only slow simmering there

at a bonfire of my suggestion
slowly melting your core until

we are drenched with love's watering


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Decaflame
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1 posted 2006-11-14 09:51 AM



I've been known to be
a wood gatherer...
let's let that bonfire
grow.




seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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2 posted 2006-11-14 10:49 AM


lovely
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-11-14 11:07 AM


It kind of takes the winter chill of the bones, doesn't it.  And it got my attention - again.  (smiles)

az

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-14 02:31 PM


ms d, thanks for the eye fires

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ms sandra, thank you for the touch lady friend

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ms az, thanks for stepping up and putting ice in my oatmeal

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-11-14 06:20 PM


I have always loved a soft breeze, and a warm bonfire light to play in.  Niiicee D~
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-11-14 06:34 PM


when the gypsy chill embraces,
you know the storms that follow
are but screams of delight



Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-11-14 06:39 PM


ms gs, thanks hon!!

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ms midnite, thank you for letting me
touch your eyes here

Edward Grim
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8 posted 2006-11-14 11:19 PM


Awesome, good as always Dark One. Cheers
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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9 posted 2006-11-14 11:45 PM



Stranger darlin'
ignite me
till you are ablaze

love this


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
10 posted 2006-11-14 11:48 PM


oh you have a way with words!!
loved this write of yours

Be well
Roniece

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
Posts 197
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11 posted 2006-11-15 05:53 AM


damn the falling!
always ruins an
adventurous moment...

Hi

Moonkist

Freedom Now

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-11-15 06:59 AM


ed, thank you so much.

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ladyone, thank you for your wave

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ms bruce, thank you so much for the read

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ms moon, thank you and welcome back

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