When soon I'll live in California

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Open Poetry #39

When soon I'll live in California

themute
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since 2006-05-08

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Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-13 11:25 PM

After hours in a sunny state
I like to think of someone.
I have her picture on the wall,
In my heart and on the wall.
Her eyes were made to waver;
Brown as earth and deep as whispers,
Hair that fluttered under winds-
I Envy for she lets it touch her
Without a blush, without shame.

I am the two-toed wanderer

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2006-11-15 03:02 PM

Matt, these are such tenderly written thoughts!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-11-15 04:03 PM

Not-So-Muted One ~

"Hair that fluttered under winds-
I Envy for she lets it touch her"

~ Oh, how loverly! ~ and touchingly poetic!

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

3 posted 2006-11-15 04:44 PM

thank you so much, i would suggest that you read "my nighttime" as it is most good.

I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (11-15-2006 05:28 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-11-16 07:49 PM

I read this the other day,
and it reminded me of several things,
and in going through those thoughts,
lost myself in a place of pleasure.

Thank you for bringing that to me.

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

5 posted 2006-11-16 10:22 PM

this brings me happiness in return. thank you too!

I am the two-toed wanderer

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