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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-11-13 10:52 AM



feasting on our love
epicurean delight
grand satiation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2006-11-13 11:27 AM



You do manage
to assuage
certain hungers,
Poet.




aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-11-13 11:34 AM


Written like a seasoned gourmet.
I like this a lot.

A

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-11-13 11:48 AM


Decaflame ~
tasty barbeque
some say finger licking good
I prefer your lips

aziza ~
seasoned by your love
basted with loving essence
sweetened with your lips

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-11-13 11:51 AM



Mmmmm....yummy!  

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2006-11-13 11:59 AM


Interlope,
A delightful haiku

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-11-13 12:01 PM


Yeppers! A love fest can certainly be highly ~ and mutally ~ gratifying!

May your sumptuous feasting never cease!


EA

LukeatNFFC
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Nottingham, England
7 posted 2006-11-13 12:04 PM


As an irregular visitor, I find the style somewhat irregular (in the weird rather than awful sense) too. Lovely though.


The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-11-13 04:14 PM



how come I'm feeling hungry?

you cook 'loper!

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