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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my mind walks beside you there under the trees of stone with leaves that whisper as we hold hands with a key ring and keys to your many places forgotten but still needed though you say you don't know why and you ask about mine how many I have are they old or new what are they too do I use them often and you tell me about lonely being a painful disease that cuts holes in your heart and ruins your dreams at night why do you talk that way about my only fiend and most loyal lover about the god I worship when on those winter highways about my maker of memories that sits on my blind shoulder and just leaves me alone to enjoy her lack of company for those hours of keyless silence ________________ daark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
about my maker of memories that sits on my blind shoulder and just leaves me alone to enjoy her lack of company you've captured me again |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ps, thank you dixie girl |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
a two-'fer day... can you make it three?  as for the poem? sense a soul wishpering ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms D, I could do a 3some perhaps later..thanks ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' something about this makes me feel sad |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yeppers, a threesome day on you would look good any day.  Enjoyed it babe. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, no..just a slice of time ms thanks and smile _____________ ms gs thanks lady friend |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...Soulful and sincere, like you are, is this poem.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
my mind walks beside you there under the trees of stone with leaves that whisper as we hold hands with a key ring and keys to your many places forgotten but still needed though you say you don't know why Wow!! I loved this - what an inspiration you are! Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you little neighbor. _____________ ms bruce, thank you for the review ms |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A walk in a petrified forest? Still the leaves whisper like ghosts to leave the night dreams for daydreams in the middle of the afternoon, and some keys are just for the music they make on the ring, keepsakes of locks long broken. ~ Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (11-14-2006 12:43 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl..thanks for your insight and your eyes |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
i understand your friend well, for he is mine at times too very well done. brought me out of the shadows for a bit. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Wow. what more can I say. kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, thanks babe!! _____________ ms angel, thank you for the touch |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I'm glad I wandered in today, I've missed reading you .. and I love this write. I keep keys on the off chance that I might want to reopen past locked doors  ~Sheli~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sheli..me too...I even pick up ones that I find beside the walkway..in case someone else needs to find their way back for the first time. Thank you for stopping in |
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