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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


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         Lady of the Lakes!
           [for: Kathy]

Would that I, like she...could live
in days of ‘perpetual morning’...
beyond my nighttime’s dejavu
of fallen rainbows...
Colors melting on the ground
flash-frozen in a sunset’s instant
by the wicked Winter wind!

She paints in words so warm and wild...
wise and ‘fancy-free’...
as any Summer breeze
with the loveliest touch of dawn inside
and I hear the purest news
that she and Nature speaks
in gentlest majesty...
'till I am calmed and quiet
and quite content...
as the mellowed Autumn mist!


© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-13-2006 07:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

secondhanddreampoet,
Enjoyed the read.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 11-13-2006 08:50 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful indeed..
but then, I enjoy every word you write.
Hugs dear poet.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


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There is nothing second handed about your writing, dear poet! To read your poetry is always a feast for my senses.

This poem is lovely beyond all my words!

May autumn's mist kiss you softly.


EA
secondhanddreampoet
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thank you all so much!....this particular poem is one (of two) that are absolutely
the 'most important' to me! [the 'inspirations' know why!]
The Lady
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would that you lived not with
fallen rainbows
colors melting on the ground
Bruce

this poem is absolutely exquisite

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Deep in the heart


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I think you have done well
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The inspiration has certainly planted a
seed that will bear fruit one day....

You will enjoy the fruits of your
labors, for they will precede you
and remain for some time.
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FANTABULOUS!
ThisDiamond
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Such a beautiful write, a soft embrace done in the vespers of dawn.
A treasure for sure.
Drauntz
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beautiful and romantic.
 
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