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At The Hearth In Firelight
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At The Hearth In Firelight |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
At The Hearth In Firelight The parchment worn in the finding of my fingers Untied ribbons, wound of many dreams still lingers Secret sanctum notes, on hobbled knees repent Songs of aching arms among the trees that won’t relent Night, the novice’ heart returns to write Verse in turn to triumph by the firelight Numb, the rhythm flushed from deep within set free Pulsing to the page, become a sage of certainty Settled down in visions simmered quietly revive Subtle in a moment’s peek, these sentiments alive Night, the novice’ heart returns to write Verse in turn to triumph by the firelight Weighted words imprint of images so strong Flicker in the molten waves that linger on Warm upon the cheek, the spell is cast Songs of aching arms set free at last Night, the novice’ heart returns to write Verse in turn to triumph by the firelight Copyright Kkh 11/11/06 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote:  Simply beautiful and captivating, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You know this is about my most favorite theme... |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I enjoyed the wording and the way it was written. Heavenly written. (In) night, the novice’ heart returns to write Verse in turn to triumph by the firelight My only suggestion in parentheses and those to stanzas summed it up alot. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'Night, the novice’ heart returns to write Verse in turn to triumph by the firelight' And ... I am soooo glad it does~  Beautifully rendered~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this 'write' truly makes my heart and hearth burn bright! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
let me sit by your hearth and read this a few more times TD I love it... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah the inspiration of winter... lovely write |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Always warms my heart and soul to read you...your tenderness of words has a calming affect...... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Kathleen...so very warm and beautiful. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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