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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 It seems almost impossible to come into this season of fading flash, (even while aware my redbird will sing come brittle air) without some ache, some aortic heaviness, some heft of breast in needful sigh… and my only string of thought is that if here can be so beautiful even given our losses… what must heaven be holding in store? Then, in between shadowed light when twi-dawn bleeds, come long ago voices blending in harmony it is then these waking eyes graze the grace of sky and I wave my love to those who still touch me come the planes. ~*~ © Karilea Rilling Jungel November 11, 2006 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"what must heaven be holding in store? Then, in between shadowed light when twi-dawn bleeds, come long ago voices blending in harmony it is then these waking eyes graze the grace of sky and I wave my love to those who still touch me come the planes." I almost copied the entire poem trying to find my favourite lines. But, the lines above touched me deeply, and I thank you for sharing such an insightful write with us. Heart hugs. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful poem written in such touching language. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "Then, in between shadowed light when twi-dawn bleeds, come long ago voices blending in harmony" The perfect time to see and hear harmony from here or there.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is quite inspiring! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"that if here can be so beautiful even given our losses…" and it is beautiful Karilea if you have been graced with eyes to see it eyes like yours lovely... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Outstandingly beautiful language and creativity! I have had these very thoughts too in some truly magical moments. Probably it's true that we cannot even begin to imagine what the upper spheres really are ... Thank you for this, dear Karilea! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
I am touched by this beyond words, but I must try, for that this plane is temporary is in my mind most every day, there are times when the 'losses' take their toll and I lose focus...this brings the focus back, sharp and clear, and oh so beautifully that if here can be so beautiful even given our losses… what must heaven be holding in store? this is precious to my heart...sigh...but then I think you know that, for you read my heart with such clarity thank you for this lady |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 feeling this one deeplyand what an honor it would be to duet with you! thinking on this, through the rain |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
"Then, in between shadowed light when twi-dawn bleeds, come long ago voices blending in harmony" I love the poem but the lines above are poetry on their own. I love this. A |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Your heart does write such lovely poetry, Karilea! Love the photo, too. Yes, I imagine we've only been given a small taste of the vision beyond... hugs, misC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
For you, a great mansion and a fancy crown  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem, Dear One With Sun, is an exquisite example of exemplary poetry!  Your quill spills rays of pure sunlight. Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is Sunshine at her best... which is wonderful indeed. *S* |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
You out did yourself on this one lady Sunshine! Thanks so much for sharing, |
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