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WindWalker
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0 posted 2006-11-11 10:44 AM


I gazed at the flowing river
on a partly cloudy morning.
In the stillness a thought formed:
“What do I believe in?”
”What do I really believe?”

The sun peeked from behind a cloud;
touched the still-wet sand
where I stood: a woman in white silk
appeared between land and water.
With a sensuous demeanor
and a smile that would light a night,
she extended her arms.

She beckoned me;
bade me lie beside her
in the dancing fire of the sun;
the whirling of the wind;
the whisperings of shifting sand:
she took me within the soul of her...

And just before she left
she said these enigmatic words:
“Believe everything.
  Believe in nothing.”

Those words were her only legacy
but I saw that if we believe “in” anything
we become trapped by that belief,
everything else becomes a lie to our mind;
but if we simply believe everything,
we empower ourselves to listen and hear,
and in the hearing is the love we seek.
“He who has ears, let him hear...”

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2006-11-11 11:59 AM


I am (perhaps unfortunately..as many folk might say?!) seldom struck virtually
‘speechless’....but, this poem did it to me!! [dearest ‘spirits that be’...I wish I could write like the followin', for example!]:

She beckoned me;
bade me lie beside her
in the dancing fire of the sun;
the whirling of the wind;
the whisperings of shifting sand:
she took me within the soul of her...

And just before she left
she said these enigmatic words:
“Believe everything.
Believe in nothing.”

What I “Believe”...is that  WindWalker  is a  hyper-fine, golden ‘poetic Voice'
...walkin’ forever in the breezes of that grand ‘immortal plain’ where fine [‘Unversal’-level] poesy eternally roams!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2006-11-11 12:56 PM


Windwalker,
you paint truth and promise in the colors of the rainbow.

Write on!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-11-11 01:03 PM


Oh...but the beauty of this, so delicate and precise...what a pleasure to believe!
Hugs WW,
One of your best I have read.
A bow to you...WIHWT.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-11-11 06:01 PM


There you go again, gifting us with profound truths, wrapped so beautifully even the rainbows are jealous.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-11-11 06:08 PM



E x q u i s i t e ! !

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-11-11 10:59 PM




“Believe everything.
  Believe in nothing.”

believe this
I love this poem


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2006-11-14 06:27 AM


simply beautiful!!

Be well
Roniece

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