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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-11-11 08:25 AM


Creation

Creation is an art a point
Illusion of a minds anoint
A wisp of air a moment’s dare
A pixel of the way you care

Aphasia of common sense
A light that stirs no recompense
A phantom of a spirits course
A giving and the soul its source

It is a statement made by you
As beautiful as mornings dew
An act that plays upon times stage
An addendum an added page

It is a force of semi fire
Clear of see with little mire
Stirring up a breeze of core
Opening up a spirits door

A place I often go in seem
It’s often in my wish and dream



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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-11-11 08:39 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

I truly do believe that when we create, we are aligning ourselves with Our Creator. He surely must be smiling at you!

Love & God's Creative Light,

EA

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2006-11-11 08:39 AM


Oh, master poet,

We drink of your creative juices
Keep quenching our thirst

Liz

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-11-11 08:50 AM


Earth Angel
You are my earth angel.

Elizabeth,
I think I'm all juiced out. LOL

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-11-11 09:05 AM


Oh Sy..I'll say it again, it is such a joy
to awaken in the morn and read your words of wisdom.
Take care and have a good weekend.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-11-11 09:10 AM


Nancy,
I look for your comments every day.

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-11-11 11:09 PM




and I shall say it again
Sir Sy
it's a joy to spend the evening
with your words

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2006-11-12 07:44 AM


catching your words this morning...thanks Sy


M

rhia_5779
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8 posted 2006-11-12 09:10 AM


Such a true write. All the poems I have read of yours are clear and very beautiful. You didn't disapoint.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-11-12 09:32 AM


Lady
I can only thank you dear Lady.

nakdthoughts
You welcome dear.

rhia_5779
A beautiful reply thank you.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
10 posted 2006-11-12 01:17 PM


what a 'Creation'!:

“ Aphasia of common sense
  A light that stirs no recompense
  A phantom of a spirits course
  A giving and the soul its source ”

I could likely read one of Seymour’s poems
a thousand times and always find somethin’
‘fresh and beautiful’ to think about!....
Grand and gracious ‘food’ for the mind, heart and spirit! [at the banquet of
‘private interpretation’]

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-11-12 01:27 PM


secondhanddreampoet
Simpatico, you are a man after my own heart.
Thank you.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
12 posted 2006-11-12 01:29 PM


Mr. Seymour Sir, I love your creation.
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-11-12 01:58 PM


SmartChick
I love you loving my creation.

passing shadows
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14 posted 2006-11-12 04:08 PM



Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2006-11-12 04:22 PM


passing,

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Deep in the heart
16 posted 2006-11-13 09:21 AM


I wish these were my words ..."at the banquet of ‘private interpretation’" since I so heartily agree with them my friend!

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-11-13 11:56 AM


Interloper
They are yours for the asking.

marcel
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18 posted 2006-11-14 08:31 PM


beautifully woven flow.......
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2006-11-14 08:49 PM


marcel
Thank you so much.

TinaTrivett
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20 posted 2006-11-14 09:32 PM


I find myself reading your poems 2 or 3 times. Just like a good book...so sad to see it end.
Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2006-11-14 10:52 PM


TinaTrivett
Excellent reply, thank you.

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