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In Some Somewhere, There |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Do you ever wonder when your not here if I too, am in some somewhere, there under the blanket of night holding you closely in my dreams; and have you ever caught yourself pondering as the highway stretches itself into some unknown horizon if I am held in some still moment, head tilted with face towards sky eyes closed, catching some sweet glimpse of yesterday rewinding through my mind as sun flashes behind closed lids, and did I suppress the smile that formed on lips or wear it then full, sun kissed in amber thoughts of you? Did your arms also ache, as mine did too from the emptiness of not holding you last night in moonlight hues sighing whispers upon the winds that they might carry the answers back to you so that you will know that I am in some somewhere, there with a heart beating the sounds of I miss you, too. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-10-2006 10:10 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, your romantica is lovely, enjoyed it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Simply beautiful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
‘romanticism’ at its finest!!: [for example]: “yesterday(s).....rewinding through my mind .....flashes behind closed lids” , etc….. [like a grand, sparkling kaleidoscope of time and memory!] OR: “sun kissed in amber thoughts of you” OR: “sighing whispers upon the winds that they might carry the answers back to you” This was one of those poems (for me at least)....that I wished could ‘go on'....and on, and on!...... LOVELY!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a dream of a poem gentle Donna... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
*sigh* Yet another one I love... "My soul is adrift in oceans of madness |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so that you will know that I am in some somewhere, there with a heart beating the sounds and the sounds in this are so vivid, so romantic...well done Donna |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My apologies for not being here sooner to thank you each. You are all, too kind. My thanks, and peace! |
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