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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-11-10 08:11 AM



Starlight
Breath taking view
Celestial beacons shine
A ballet of soft lights twinkling
Prismatically painting skies of eve
Beauty revealed as eyes admire
Visions of wonderment
In still of night
Starlight


seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-10-2006 08:43 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-11-10 08:36 AM


Gentle Spirit
Written by the light of the moon.
A delightful write.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-11-10 08:54 AM


beautiful
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-11-10 03:43 PM



I love the way
you do
what you do
gentle Donna

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-11-10 04:29 PM


Must match your eyes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-11-10 07:58 PM



Yep.  Time change will do that...



And you know I know
you know what I really
think.



Mom


garysgirl
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6 posted 2006-11-10 08:52 PM


Gently beautiful as a Gentle Spirit.
Love it, Donna!!
Hugs,
Ethel

ShadowLost
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7 posted 2006-12-09 12:39 PM


How pretty this is.  Lovely writing.  
Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2006-12-09 12:51 PM


beautiful description of the stars....take care........

kingsangel

trutodaraiders
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9 posted 2006-12-09 01:27 PM


You did a beautiful job! Very good at those hair pulling richameters.
FNG
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10 posted 2006-12-12 12:19 PM


your words are twinkling

A nice read.

FNG

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2006-12-14 04:18 AM


gosh this is lovely!  RDB
LeeJ
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12 posted 2006-12-14 08:50 AM


absolutely beautiful!!!!!
inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2006-12-14 11:37 AM


seasonlly timely
for now
a softness glows
from above

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just out of reach
14 posted 2006-12-14 12:57 PM


Love this Donna! Beautiful.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

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