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0 posted 2006-11-10 07:21 AM






It starts easily enough
In waking to the chirp of
Early morn, seeking her light,
But it is when I draw away,
In search of my own road
I feel my burdens
Grow

But I know she is there,
Her silence allowing me to
Ponder matters
I would otherwise not share

For a toll is not only taken
As a scathing fee,  
But a letting of soul ~
I’ve let mine once too often
Though hardly anyone knows,
But she, for

She has become my comfort
In dancing her words
Before me, she,
A delight in spring, becoming summer,
Falling in to winter ~
I need her ever seasoning
My soul

For the toll she expects
Is only to hear the carillon
Near the church
To match her steps
And pave my way
To know, in her, I may repose.

I am, to her, her natural witch.

When she smiles,
My heart is lifted,
The toll, extracted,
Our tomorrows entwined
In familiarity that has
No boundaries.



© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-10 07:24 AM


lucky friend you have
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2 posted 2006-11-10 07:40 AM


ms sun, enjoyed this layer of you lady!!
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3 posted 2006-11-10 08:21 AM


Your friend, is blessed in knowing you Mommak.  
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4 posted 2006-11-10 09:19 AM


"...familiarity that has
No boundaries."
What a wonderful phrase and a wonderful place to be!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2006-11-10 10:14 AM


Beautiful Karilea. A lucky friend indeed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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6 posted 2006-11-10 12:14 PM


Sissie..

"I am, to her, her natural witch."

You are to me, most lovely inside and out!  

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7 posted 2006-11-10 03:41 PM




"I’ve let mine once too often
Though hardly anyone knows,
But she"

a love letter Karilea
a beautiful love letter...


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8 posted 2006-11-10 04:07 PM


I like this-there is warmth and spirit.  Good images.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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9 posted 2006-11-10 09:46 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Karilea! Hope you are okay. I haven't heard back from you, simce I emailed you.
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