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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-01 11:45 AM



Grasp my hand and walk with me,
letting love guide our course,
(though it may draw us to uncertainty),
that our love, time may endorse!

Allow time to make still this night,
so thine eyes may forever hold thy look
that holds so precious thy sight,
and thy heart that love has overtook.

Let upon these thirsting lips be placed a kiss,
for what may come of such an affair
that thy caress may produce love to this
virgin heart made proudly bare.

Though time remains still, love shall not,
for love is waning from it's youth,
so farewell to such a loving thought;
a timeless love has lost it's truth!

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



© Copyright 2007 Bill Franklin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-01-01 12:46 PM


Very beautiful write!
Much enjoyed the read...
Happy New Year to you and yours.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-01 12:57 PM


Thank You Enchanterss Hope you have a wonderful New Year (:
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-01-02 12:12 PM




sadly beautiful Bill...

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-02 12:25 PM


Thank you for the sad review lady
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5 posted 2007-01-02 06:10 AM


Grasp my hand and walk with me,
letting love guide our course,
(though it may draw us to uncertainty),
that our love, time may endorse!

Allow time to make still this night,
so thine eyes may forever hold thy look
that holds so precious thy sight,
and thy heart that love has overtook.


timelss thoughts~~

enjoyed
M

trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2007-01-02 09:58 AM


thank you M for your warm thoughts this morning
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