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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-11-10 12:15 PM


I don't need a map to know that
the stars are all in their place
I don't need a picture
to remember your gorgeous face
I don't need an astronaut
to light up the dark side of the moon
I don't need a postman to
send my love to you
and I don't need a pyschic
to tell me that it's true!!!

© Copyright 2006 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-10 07:53 AM


loved those first two lines!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-11-10 07:54 AM



In other words,
there's no doubting Thomas
in your soul.

Lovely, and charming...
Looking forward to more
from you.


The Lady
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3 posted 2006-11-10 04:16 PM




I like those first two lines too Julie
remind me of Dickinson
well done...

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-11-10 04:24 PM


I don't need somone
to tell me I like your write
it was wonderful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-11-10 04:24 PM


Enjoyed reading about the strength of your convictions!

From one believer in the power of love to another,


EA

DreamerSpirit
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6 posted 2006-11-10 05:13 PM


Excellent...
i really enjoyed reading this, made me think a lot!
thanks for sharing!

Denis.

Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2006-11-10 06:09 PM


Thank you for your reviews glad you liked it. Sweet kisses from me to all of you!!! Julie

kingsangel

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2006-11-11 02:32 AM


Nice....James
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