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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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Your smile awakens my soul, As the sun awakens the day. A kiss and my life is yours, It seems a fair price to pay. Your touch arouses my senses, As the moon arouses the night. Hold me and win me forever, In your arms all things are right. Your heart endures all emotion, As the sky endures all the stars. Love me and we'll have eternity, There is no greater love than ours. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! This is one huge *SIGH* just waiting to happen. Love it!!  Sing in me muse... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely! A nice way to start the New Year, no doubt! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of my favorites that you have written. Powerful emotions, excellent wordsmithing, flawless cadence. All Blessings to you. TD |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Hugs** Thanks for all the comments! Thank You Diamond for your sweet words. ~Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's a pretty powerful love Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Well spoken young poet. There is an abundance of pieces in the archives which may serve as inspiration to a romantic spirit such as yours. I invite you to browse older Moonshadow posts. MoonShadow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Always remain 'tru' to your heart! ~ For the heart knows! ~ and yours is pure, romantic, and guileless.  Loverly as ever!  EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
yup this is a sigher all right sigh... |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Romance is alive and well here Bill...sigh!  Bea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful Bill! RDB |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
You guys and gals are 2 kind. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts.. |
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