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hand and petals |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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so many sweet petals have passed through that hand waiting for sunlight held to a crush still longing for those fingers nor can I call them foolish I too have been passed from finger to finger of the same gentle hand giving up my scent waiting for sunlight yet finding bliss in dark |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The Lady, Your poetry always flows so gracefully with depth and imagery. I love it! Wish I could hang out here more! Have a good evening! miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You sing a sweet song.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, a sweet song indeed. "nor can I call them foolish" - nope, can't do that. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, enjoyed this handful of love song |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
So very fine. Thanking you. Helen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tender and beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
for some reason I have a vision of you holding a blood red carnation... lovely images... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
To an unabashedly ‘incurable romantic’ “dream-poet” like m....this ‘write’ is simply marvelous!..... for me...it was like readin’ Robert Burns...and that’s as good as it gets! I’m “gone huntin” for as many works as I can find by this deep and lovely ‘poetic Voice’! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I love this. May I keep it?  hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...How beautiful, is all I can think to say...because it is! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such hands are rare; they hold gifts of passionate dreams to be savored, petal-by-petal. Would that we could, each of us would hold such a bouquet, if only for a day. ~sigh~ understanding this |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you misce’ good evening to you thank you Sir Sy I appreciate you always Honeybunch you know this kind of love I see thank you Stranger darlin’ it’s all about those blessed blissful fingers thank you Helen Dixie thank you so much that’s because you know me so well Karilea thank you Bruce you unabashedly incurable romantic dream-poet do you mean the Robert Burns? thank you is not enough I will send you a check thank you ‘loper Chris I am glad you like it enough to want to keep it thank you Martie thank you so much thank you for your lovely words Kacy I knew you would understand |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Wonderfully beautiful imagery. Your writes are always enjoyable. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Steve |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty....just flowing gracefully along. So smooth. Hugs, Ethel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Ethel... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your writing takes my breath away. I want to keep the images in my pocket and enjoy them throughout my day. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you aziza shove them in your pocket I would love it if you took them along |
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