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sim0riah
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0 posted 2006-11-08 09:31 AM


When we make love
I want to expose every inch of your body
And feel those parts untouched

I want to caress your lips with mine
Stopping all of time
I want to get lost in the thought of remembering
This moment all my life

When we make love
I want to stare deep in your beautiful eyes
Consume your wanting soul

I want to feel your tender kiss
It's something I can't resist
I want to hear the sound of your pleasure
Like it's your first and only time

When we make love
I want to feel every emotion between us
A daring journey together

I want to dance with you ever so close
Every step perfect and precise
As the music plays, nothings out of time
We move together as one
When we make love

When we make love
I can see the stars in your eyes
When we make love
Its then I finally realize
That all the dreams I've gathered
In this long and lonely life
Have finally come true
When I find myself making love
To loving you




Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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1 posted 2006-11-08 01:12 PM


Rick~
This is breathtakingly lovely~

I left this reply earlier ... but it seems to have vanished in thin cyber-air~

Sooooo .. here it is again~

BEAUTIFUL~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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sim0riah
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2 posted 2006-11-08 02:55 PM


Thanks Marge I appreciate it. I think I may put some music to this one

Rich

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3 posted 2006-11-08 06:02 PM


Rick~
And, I'm sure it will be lovely ...~
I know I wouldn't mind having it sung to me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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