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Love Story
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Love Story |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Another beautiful sunset, Against a mountain view, Beauty uncomparable, Romance shared by two. It wasn't their first encounter, They'd loved so much before, Each time better than the last, Who could ask for more? Their bodies entertwined, Now "one" in love togehter, As the sun went down in color, A partnership forever. Their commitments sealed with promise, A love now never ending, A honeymoon in Paris, Their passions just beginning. It's such a touching love song, One that brings those happy tears, Nothing will come between them INTERLOPER AND BALLADEER |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OKToeMan~ You led me down such a beautiful pathway ... then ZAP ! ... The ZINGER !! Now I KNOW you're okay~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag LOL for a moment I was picturing you and Balladeer. Glad to see your up and at it again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Toe! You are so bad!! That's why we love you so much! LOL...Hugs~Nancy No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Darling man, there I was picturing the scene, which you painted so beautifully then wham you well and truly got me. Love the form and you did it so very well, well done. as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh dear Toe I loved this and that ending just grabs ya don't it.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You bad, bad boy !! LOL !! Great to read your wild words again Toe! hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How romantic. You ... you.  Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
PTUI!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
That was a very beautiful painted picture Nicely done RIch |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You trying to fool us, or something....not me...nope!! |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
~ Hey you ol' man, I see you still haven't lost your touch ... or sense of humor |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
As I read your great work, I always wonder which comes to you first, the poem or the punch line? LOL Rae |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
peanut brain... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dear Toe, What a delight to find you've not snuffed off this mortal coil yet...Heaven wouldn't take you and the devil was afraid you'd take over hey? I love the sting, you still have the best scorpion blood in the world. Cheers Keth who is stalling the devil with promises I won't keep. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You made me laugh -- again. |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
I have'nt been here very long, but I think you just might be a naughty boy.Loved it.Thanks Helen. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 You little monkey! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What, no 'deer reply as of yet? All the more reason to keep this at the top. You rascal!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and may both Interloper and Balladeer be as happy as you and Balladeer once were. Toe, I just put in a search for any poems of yours that I might have missed and found this fine example of a Toerag Twist signature poem! Hope all is well with you!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-17-2006 12:55 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
God this was beautiful and would make one fine sounding song...would love this put to music, for Deer and his special one. Great! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
there I was feeling all soft and mushy and... you made me laugh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... You do love to stir up trouble, don't you? LOL |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Remind me to stay on your good side. Loved the write! Omnia vincit amor |
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