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PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 69
South Australia, Australia

0 posted 2006-11-07 06:48 PM



Whew! Pongy breathe
and look at your feet,
I wish you'd wash your face
when you've had something to eat.
And what is that?
Last weeks left over stew or
those lamb chop's Dad gave you.
Really, your hygiene habit's
are preety paw,
Keep this up and you'll be out the door.

Just as well you've
got some saving grace's
and it's not licking your bum
then licking people's face's.
I must admit though,I enjoy our talk's,
I love your big brown eye's
and our zig-zaggy walk's.
I really miss you when I'm away,
so if you don't mind
I'd like you to stay.

After all, Brandy,
having a guard dog
that lick's people to death
is pretty handy,
and the trick's you do
for a little bit of liver
alway's make me laugh,
people think your very clever
and pretty good looking too.

What's it been, now 5 year's?
of chasing cat's,and terrorising the postman
and sleeping along side my bed
when I've got a bad head.
What I don't understand,
How do you know when thing's ar'nt right
and I'm not feeling well?
when you gently sniff my breathe
and nuzzle my hair
then so softly lay your head across my legs?
How can you tell!

Well Brandy boy,
I'll fetch your lead
you wait by the gate,
It's time
for your innoculation's and registration,
I might buy you a bone and a new bowl too,
If that's O.K. with you,
And some say your spoilt ,
what do they know,
come'on mate let's go.

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william foos
Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa
1 posted 2006-11-07 07:02 PM


amimals are psychic as we are animals by sicentific defenition but we are all tought to unfocus out thoughts keep doing well great write
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

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