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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-11-07 05:46 PM


I should've shut the door
I should've looked over my shoulder
I should've had your hand to hold onto

I kicked and I screamed
I cried and then my tears
dried away

I could almost feel your breath
I could almost hear your voice
I could almost feel the magic
and feared I had no choice

I should've had no fear
I should've felt your love
I shoulda I coulda
But my angel said Far Enough


AK

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1 posted 2006-11-07 08:24 PM


spoken from the heart that still hurts, and I truly understand. Welcome, to painting words on this blue canvas.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-11-07 11:22 PM


Hi

welcome to Passions!

um_idk
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3 posted 2006-11-08 01:43 AM


i liked it very much
welcome

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2006-11-09 10:33 PM


Thank you for your kind replies all of you....going through an abscure period right now. words are hard to find. Thank you again. KA
aziza
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5 posted 2006-11-13 02:16 AM


I am enjoying reading your poems.
Welcome to PiP.

aziza

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2006-11-14 06:40 AM


Welcome!  I look forward to reading more of you - enjoyed this write

Be well
Roniece

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-11-14 09:04 AM


Welcome to the blue pages.
You are gonna like it here

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2006-11-14 07:39 PM


Thanks for your posts
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