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since 2006-04-29
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0 posted 2006-11-07 01:04 PM



I cannot climb
this ladder
of smoke
in these shoes
of lead

so I am
unlacing
the shoes
and giving
the ladder
to the wind

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-11-07 01:06 PM


Oh my! Excellent!  I like the feel, the construction, the whole thing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2006-11-14 04:39 AM


enjoyed this - the visual was very powerful

Be well
Roniece

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