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Open Poetry #39

Cut Me Loose

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-07 02:03 AM

Cut me loose
Then save me from myself
And others weak;
Weep for me not
And sing for me low
So you’re ready to face the fire
When I go.

Layer on pain,
Streak on sorrow,
For according to you
This divinity of blasphemy
We all share,
In sinners’ shadows
We lurk;
Un-wanting, unwilling
Only alive in the eyes of the
Condemned.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-07 07:41 AM

this one aches in me

good one

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-11-07 07:55 AM

Miranda,
This echoes with the shadows of pain felt by so many. You worded the perfection of the pain wonderfully.

Sandra

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2006-11-07 01:05 PM

I like the lyrical feel of this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

4 posted 2006-11-07 10:24 PM

passing shadows- thank you, it aches within me everyday.

sandra- thank you, pain is among the clearest emotions for me to write about.

pilgrimage- thank you very much

~Miranda~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-11-09 06:25 PM

Nice writing...James

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2006-11-10 01:08 AM

how sad. I have felt this way, thanks for sharing. Julie

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