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shirtless
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since 2006-04-29
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0 posted 2006-11-06 10:22 PM



REJECTED BY TIME

I have been rejected
by every moment
I have lived;
every moment
I have loved
has left me.

and now
I ride
the one-winged bird
of memory;
though
at best
it can only turn
the fall
into a spiral.

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JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21
Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa
1 posted 2006-11-06 10:36 PM


Very cool. I enjoyed this one very much.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-11-06 11:11 PM


I picture this in my mind

bittersweet write

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going
3 posted 2006-11-06 11:15 PM


very powerful write.

to think memory as a one winged bird spiraling from miles in the air is amazing to me.

thank you for sharing,
-John

nice use of muffin



seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
4 posted 2006-11-07 07:59 AM


I love reading you, though there are moments I just do not know how to reply, for there are so many words and to put them in a uniform structure is daunting. So I keep the unformed sentences to myself.

Then again, there are your works that leave only one word left to describe.

Wonderful.

And this is exactly just that.

Sandra

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2006-11-14 04:44 AM


beautiful write Anthony - I hope you don't spiral though

Be well
Roniece

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2006-11-14 09:31 AM


Most excellent Tony!!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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