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My hero

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Grinch
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My hero gauged his valor by my fear,
measured in the increments of tears
that flecked the tramlines of my cheek
as blood flecked his.

The jester saw my pain and mirrored mirth;
wrought smiles from daggers through my heart
in mockery of scars and ills
he laughed them off.

Death seeking sadness laid his claim
my hero and the jester fell
which left me lost and silent save my tears
and fatherless.
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1 posted 11-06-2006 08:38 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

you write pains moments with such grace
passing shadows
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in a certain other way, I can relate to this
but I won't go into it

good write
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sad! But Hero forever lives in one's heart!!!and as one of the support of life.
 
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