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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-11-06 08:31 AM



Candelabra

Tumbling in a solar waterfall
The sky set in gemstones, weeps
Wishes parasol
Sparkling, on the love one keeps
Romantic highlights all
Faith as a flame

Enchanted moments spill
In shimmer, dusts the face of night
Dreams in beacon thrill
Simmering celestial light
As time cascades, and will
Passion as a flame

Tumbling in a solar waterfall
Lit of fiery myth sustains
Tears as diamonds fall
Scents of magic surge and wanes
A shooting star as hopes befall
Love as a flame

Copyright Kkh 11/6/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-11-06 08:36 AM


Kathleen, your gorgeous write
cascades down the page
like a beautiful
tear.

Much enjoyed this lovely.

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-11-06 09:13 AM


I love it!
More!!!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-06 09:46 AM


I felt as if I was in the middle of a cosmic lightshow!

awesome write!

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-11-06 03:31 PM





divine TD


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Gaia
5 posted 2006-11-06 09:49 PM


I found this to be soothing, refreshing.
Thank you, for that is just what i need to re-enforce me tonight.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2006-11-07 08:05 PM


Aside from bein’ and unabashedly (dangerously) ‘incurable romantic’,
I am also a trained ‘field’ geologist/geoscientist....
How could I not LOVE a ‘solar
waterfall....’sky set in gemstones’!....
Resplendent with ‘simmering celestial light’.....Dearest ‘spirits that be’........ I admire grand imagery!.........
This work is truly “Romantic highlights all” !!.....If Love is the flame.....this poem burns like fire and moonlight!
I so look forward to readin’ much more by this ‘poetic voice’....on this grand website!.....

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