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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-11-06 08:06 AM


The Wet

The rain comes down and wets my mind
My sane is blurred I’m semi blind
I try to place a circumvent
But cannot stop what God has sent

Horizons stay a misty Moore
And tantalize my visions poor
Showing phantoms in the light
Those fantasies of semi white

Where dragons and angels fly
Where ego makes the psyche sigh
Where magic tips the scale a bit
And fireflies will wink in wit

I love the vision of the rain
It lends a paddle to my brain
It opens up a state of core
Dimensions of another door

And in this moments time of brief
I rapture in sublime relief


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1 posted 2006-11-06 08:41 AM


Morning Sy!
You are a joy to wake up to these dark mornings.
Come dance with me in the puddles.
& ~Nancy

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-11-06 08:55 AM


Nancy,
It would be my pleasure to dance with you.

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3 posted 2006-11-06 09:12 AM


As usual, Sy, well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2006-11-06 09:36 AM


oh yes, I could go for a little dancing myself! What an inspirational poem!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-11-06 10:06 AM


Interloper
Thank you for the read and comment.

Passing
I'll put you on my card too.

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6 posted 2006-11-06 10:53 AM


What a pleasure it is to wake up to a beautiful poem from our dear Seymour. It is a freat way to start my day.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-11-06 10:59 AM


SmartChick
I do so enjoy your comments.

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8 posted 2006-11-06 11:40 AM


Seymour~
I've taken off my shoesies for a poetic puddle-jump with you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-11-06 01:46 PM


Marge,
The pleasure is all mine.

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10 posted 2006-11-06 04:04 PM




Sir Sy
if you still have your shoes off
take me for a spin too?

I just adore the rain
and you

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-11-06 04:18 PM


Lady
My shoes are off and you are in. :queeze:

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12 posted 2006-11-06 09:19 PM


Rain, rain come and stay
Let them splash the day away
With mud squishing through the toes
Where it ends, no one knows


Enjoyed!

   Rae

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-11-06 09:54 PM


Rae,
Thank you for the interesting reply.

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