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gypsyheartx
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0 posted 2006-11-06 12:33 PM


Hold me like wine;
Tangle me in unbridled waves of auburn hair
And caress the protruding angst,
That burns away my truths
And scars what is left of effervescent mind.
Dream of people pretend
And remember their names
So when face meets earth
And hands meet fallow flesh
You can realize fates untold, and memories sold,
For such is the story of a child forgotten.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-06 09:51 AM


I love your brevity, but still having so much said within it
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2 posted 2006-11-06 10:13 AM


gypsyheartx,
Enjoyed the aread.

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3 posted 2006-11-06 10:18 AM


Very nicely done gypsyheartx - enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

gypsyheartx
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4 posted 2006-11-06 08:38 PM


passing shadows- thank you, vast meaning can come from a single word, so i like to keep things short

Seymour Tabin- Thank you very much, glad you liked.

Nightshade- Thank you as well, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Hugs~
Gypsy

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