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Losing It

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Grinch
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Whoville


0 posted 11-05-2006 04:15 PM       View Profile for Grinch   Email Grinch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Grinch


I may have lost it at the party
But would have sworn I had it then
Could that really be last summer?
I don’t suppose it matters when.

I remember when I wore it
Walking through the park at night
Yours was always somehow better
Mine could never be so bright.

When you giggled it was there
When you kissed me, for a while,
Then you left…now I remember
Exactly when I lost my smile.

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 11-05-2006 04:26 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Hit hard...
This one...smacks with reality...took a turn I didn't expect.
You are growing in your art...exponentially.
Write ON!
passing shadows
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displaced


2 posted 11-05-2006 08:21 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very clever
Tracey
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3 posted 11-05-2006 10:05 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

Interesting twist at the end. I enjoyed this

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

TomMark
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4 posted 01-06-2008 09:40 PM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

sadness of light hearted kind. Who knew the hurt?
 
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