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Re-weaving of Tangled Webs
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Re-weaving of Tangled Webs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tangled Webs ~*Marge Tindal*~  Woven word by deceitful word threads in silken-stretch so tightly Choking off the verse of another nightly after nightly after nightly~ When in the stark light of day the wind blows the words away All that's left in the tangled web are morsels of honor-in-ebb~ Woven weave of wordy deceit does not hold the web so neat Falls away in dishonored verse curse oh curse oh curse~ Spider has not an honored home when woven with threads not his own~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
No matter how one re-weaves it Marge.. when it's done the threads are still the same. Most excellent write. Big hugs & Love ya. No spring, nor summer beauty |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh what a tangled web this is a beauty Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I appreciate both of you ladies~ Webs of deceit do not come untangled easily, do they ? *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
It is likely highly presumptuous for a very small, unknown 'voice' like myself....to even comment on a poem by a grand 'poetic presence' of the caliber of Ms. Tindal.... may I just say...that as a 'poet-knight', I've spent a lifetime tryin' mostly to weave warm, safe, and shining 'dreams'.... but, us dangerously 'incurably romantic' idealists need to be periodically reminded 'bout the self-involved, cruel, and evil-spirits out there that truly do weave 'nightmares '(via deceit; abuse of power; etc)...personally, I prefer all the most toxic spiders Nature has to offer...to even one such human 'tangled web' weaver!....In my ever-most-humble opinion, this is an important poem with fine imagery and timeless content! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Marge!!! I love you!!! I have been needing to hear the message that this portrays. My spirits are lifted and some faith restored. Keep writing. Take Care, KA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ You humble me with such praise ... thank you from the heart of my little bottom~ Angel~ Welcome to PiP ... and thank you for such a glowing reply~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, we think alike you and I and while I'm slumming around England here you are stealing my thunder. Love the unspoken in this one. regards Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You never fail to amaze me with your word weaving! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ LOL @ "slumming around" ... I wish I was slumming with you girls !! And ... yes, the deceit of stealing the words of another is a reprehensible sin~ Loper~ Thank you ... I just write what I perceive as right~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This is how I feel about plagiarists~ To steal the words of another, then post them as your own garner praise and lavish in it is to weave a dishonorable home~ If you do it ... then this one is definitely written for you~ Um ... now just where ARE those *Huglets* ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm glad this came up.....I've started looking for a way to find whether my own work is being plagiarized...finally got some pride, I guess! Anyway, if anybody can clue me in, I'd sure appreciate it. ...steal a piece of someone else's soul, and pretend it's their own....evidence that they had none to begin with. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ One of the lowest scumbags on the planet are the plagiarists ... they need to be stopped~ My words-in-flow, as well as the words of all others, deserve to carry our names for the all of time~ I spend hours and hours tracking down those who dare to steal my words and steal the credit that I am due~ They are not worthy of showing any mercy to ... I go after them through legal channels and they had best know that I am serious and diligent in trying to protect my work~ Copyright Infringement is a serious, serious offense to all writers~ Check your email, my friend ... I've got a good tool to let you know about~ Love you~  *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl dearest one, why did I miss this beauty? I know I was busy at the time but that is no excuse for abandoning ones closest friends now is it? This is just outstanding writing, and so very, very true, the lies and deceit of a plagiarist are just unforgivable. I am spending so much time doing my university course that I haven’t written anything except essays on anything remotely interesting. This month it has been Art history, The sonnet form and meaning, Musical interpretation, and Philosophy –ethical valuation. Well one thing is certain Plagiarism is not at all ethical or something I can be philosophical about. You just know I love your writing don’t you? like you forever Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
have profound meaning. Beautiful picture. "Spider has not an honored home when woven with threads not his own~" how ture!! and with a sense of romance. enjoyed |
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