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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

0 posted 2006-11-04 11:42 PM




I’m just waiting on someone to see
What’s been bothering me
I’m screaming and I’m yelling
Can you not hear what I’m telling?
No one seems to listen and no one seems to care
All they seem to be able to do
Is sit around and stare
Forgive me if I’m wrong
But I’m not all that strong
What’s the point in giving all you got?
When in the end
All they do is leave you to rot
Life has always been this vicious
There’s only those heartfelt with wishes
I don’t see any motivation
Only pain and mutilation
In the end I don’t know that much
And every one tells me to hush
But I can’t seem to take it
So why should I sit around and
Fake it?
I’m just waiting on some one to see
What’s really been eating me
But everyone turns up their noses
Living in a world full of roses
Pretending that everything is fine
Saying I’m the one who’s lost her mind
So I’m just waiting on some one to bust out and say
That even though it's all messed up we'll all be
Okay
Till then I'll keep waiting
For everyone to stop their faking
And maybe then they'll see
What's really been bothering me


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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-11-05 01:27 AM




people never see what's bothering us Kira
we must tell them
even though it's all messed up
it really will be okay...

I like your plea poem


Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2006-11-05 09:58 AM



Thank you Lady!
I'm very flattered to have you reading my poems.Yes, in the end it will all be okay I believe.

Hugs and Hershey bars for the lovely poet!

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