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Grinch
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0 posted 11-04-2006 02:46 PM       View Profile for Grinch   Email Grinch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Grinch


There are words to paint sombre, to picture alone,
Descriptions of sadness, of feelings Iíve known.
Incantations for screaming why at the wind,
Questions of if and what morning may bring.

There are sentences laced with sobs and dismay,
Names for deceit and the price people pay,
Angry words honed Ďtil they cut like a blade,
Designed to hurt more than mistakes that you've made.

There are phrases and verses to measure mans pain,
Summations on sorrow for regrets that remain.
With all these fine words I just wish I knew why
Iím shattered by a simple goodbye.

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 11-04-2006 03:00 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

More pointed is the arrow of goodbye
Longer does it linger in it's death twist
Deeper does it wound and farther does it fly
The only healing power strong enough to mend
Just three little words that another may send.

Strong write.
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Me too, for it stabs the heart.
TomMark
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Beautiful sadness. You are good at writing this kind.  
 
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