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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-11-03 07:48 PM


he knows what happens to me
sometimes
when he is toothsome
and I pop sassy
like I did today
too big for my britches
likely to say
… almost anything  
and I did say it too

he laughed at me    
little chuckle  
that began in his heart  
sneaked out his mouth
made me stamp my foot
turn my back
arms crossed

c’mere
he said
trying to hold that chuckle back
hands at my waist
body against my back
do you know
what you do to me
when you act that way  

I struggle
that chuckle grabs my hands  
leans me against his chest  
face captures mine
nuzzle

now he’s got me
where I want me


© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-11-03 08:18 PM


Lady...I loved the feel of this delight!  
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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-11-03 08:25 PM


Sweet !!
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2006-11-03 10:01 PM


niceeeeeeeeee
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-11-03 10:16 PM


*big grin*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-11-03 10:21 PM


"now he’s got me
where I want me"

Oooh yessss!!

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2006-11-04 07:34 AM



It's all about body language...




Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-11-04 08:32 AM


  such language!  hehehe! Delightful.
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
8 posted 2006-11-04 11:54 AM


Lady, that scene is SO familiar lol

*grins*

~*Sheli*~

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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2006-11-04 11:59 AM


Lady,
A delight to read.

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2006-11-04 11:23 PM


Damn, damn, damn!  I wanted to write this one!  This is a great poem ... just awesome.  I love it.

xoxoxo
A

aziza
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11 posted 2006-11-04 11:32 PM


I want this poem to be mine!
Mine!
All mine!

I am suffering from severe poetry envy!!!
A

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-11-05 02:08 AM



thank you Martie
love is a delight…

Chris
thank you     

thank you Helen

thank you Dixie  
I like your grin


Thank you Nancy  
it’s all good


you know it Karilea  
thank you

thank you
Klassy Lassy    

been there
have you Sheli?
fun, huh?

thank you Sir Sy
I appreciate you always

lol
thank you aziza  
how ‘bout if I share it with you?  
which part you want?


Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2006-11-06 06:50 AM


ladyone, kewl playful little girl with flirty pants on..enjoyed this
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Deep in the heart
14 posted 2006-11-06 09:16 AM


... and you have us where you want us
So very well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kira Aso
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Closer to Hell...
15 posted 2006-11-06 01:19 PM



This was incredable Lady!
(I envy you're talent as well)

Luved this soooo much!!!!

seraphin
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16 posted 2006-11-06 01:55 PM


Nothing needs to be added. It has all been said. All that is left to me, is to bow humbly.

*bow*

(Maybe a meek "Kate Rocks" will slip out...yep...there it goes!)

Sandra

The Lady
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17 posted 2006-11-06 04:25 PM




Stranger darlin’
were you looking at my flirty pants?
devil  

thank you Loper


thank you Kira
glad you enjoyed

Sandra
you make me chuckle  
thank you so much
my friend


twinkyfl1
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18 posted 2006-12-17 04:28 AM


"now he’s got me
where I want me"

Looovin it!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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19 posted 2006-12-17 04:32 AM


ooooh damn sexxxxy!     RDB
The Lady
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20 posted 2006-12-17 10:41 PM





twinkyfl1
thank you

thanks Roniece


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