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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2006-11-03 10:07 AM


My Earthly flame is dying:
I must go, start a new journey
but remember this my child:
"If ever you should slip
trying to climb over a cliff,
I will be wind lifting you up
to solid ground;
if ever your roots become exposed
from worries and sorrows,
I will be earth
to cover them;
if ever they become dry
from too many judgments,
I will be rain
to give them new life;
if ever you lose your way
through clouds of doubt
or shadows of despair,
I will be sun
to light and warm your way;
if ever you lose sight of your vision,
I will be eyes
to guide you over many roads:
I will always be with you
on this singular journey of the Spirit.”

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-11-03 10:55 AM


....My goodness, WW, what a legacy! What a write!

This is an exceptional piece of spirit writing!

It appears that the acorn did not fall far from his mother oak!

Love & Spirit Light,

EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-11-03 12:38 PM


A splendid write!!
I so much enjoyed this for my own personal reasons.
And therefore...I'm keeping this one tucked in my library.
Heart hugs~Nancy

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-11-03 02:18 PM


WindWalker~
Such a pour of inked wisdom~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2006-11-07 09:12 PM


For me there is nothing finer
than to read such a strong
poetic presence speaking
with the grand ‘Voice’ of
Nature; spirit-vision;
and a mother's purest love!

The last 10 lines of this poem,
In my opinion are particularly
wonderful.....
such a grand joy  to read!.....
It sparkles for me like the
poetry of  Robert Burns
and the prose of
Henry David Thoreau....

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2006-11-08 08:13 AM


Clearly, this poet is the combine spirit, and so blessed are these readers to be touched.
Hugs,
TD

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