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I Loved You Tomorrow
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I Loved You Tomorrow |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I Loved You More Tomorrow Hesitantly the sun kissed you to life While you slept on endless eternities Preparing yourself to be the beautiful wife Dressed in crystal stars and love-struck butterflies As the words of the soul form a persona pristine Dancing invisibly with a secret lover Imitating fairytales and endings foreseen Under constellations of dwarves, apples and necromancers While reality attempts to touch sacred thoughts Etched on the face of diamonds, rubies and other shiny rocks A gift to you because that is what your heart sought… But in the distance, a magic mirror laughs and mocks And in its reflection a beating heart stops As the sunset fades into the hopes of dreams… Marcel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This spoke to me of a woman, so caught up in her dream of what life would be, she ceased to realize all it could be...and the heart that broke watching. Your poetry grows rich in its insight and depth. Hugs, TD |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
There's more to this than gossamer and sparkly rocks. I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You mesmerized me. |
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