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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-11-02 09:10 PM



she dances and spins
writhes within
a circle of love
everlasting

he watches not

palms upward
supplicating
invoking
begging

he listens not

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-02 09:20 PM


well, I bet she is beautiful anyway
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-11-02 10:49 PM


He doesn't dare...
Entrapment's delight...

Well done, Kacy!


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3 posted 2006-11-03 12:10 PM


How sad. But, they never seem to pay attention. Do they?
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4 posted 2006-11-03 09:30 AM



Well done, indeed!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (11-03-2006 11:11 AM).]

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5 posted 2006-11-03 10:43 AM


Most assuredly, his loss!

She's a delightful, whimsical sprite of a spirit!

A stirring write and one that many women could identify with at one time or another in their life! Men should listen and learn!

Loving Light,

Linda


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6 posted 2006-11-03 11:23 AM


thanks for reading
Sunshine

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7 posted 2006-11-03 12:16 PM


Short but says a lot Kacy, thank you..

Goldenrose.

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8 posted 2006-11-05 10:58 AM


Men are like this, yes. But if you stopped dancing he would suddenly ask you to go on ... in his bones he is grateful.

Very captivating write, dear Kacy.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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9 posted 2006-11-05 12:29 PM


Thanks for reading and replying!
M, naw...I am not going to dance to his tune.

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