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0 posted 2006-11-02 06:53 PM



Walking along a deserted sand covered highway
darkness obscuring faded lines on each side.
Remembering love's ride on a distant railway.
Twas a wonderfully sensuous swaying train ride.

Sitting in a fantasy world aside each other
while drinking coffee, cream, sugar and wine.
Gazing into dark eyes, love cannot smother
as they remember shared passions....sighed.

He will always have her in his dreams
no matter how far reality lies away.
Waiting for her to come out of cool streams
and burn his clear fantasy night into day.

Two distant loves share a tender moment or two
of each torrid tale that each writes.
Giving up exciting love, devotion too.
as each departs a fantasy world of dream lights.

He will gracefully smother her eyes with his pen
as she sits reading, smiling and wondering how
this man will continue to write words that win
her sigh, a smile and a boy howdy, wow oh wow.


A BP write (before Passions)....

© Copyright 2006 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-02 09:26 PM


very nice Barry

thanks for sharing this BP

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2 posted 2006-11-03 02:06 AM



beautifully done Barry
your pen is so gentle...

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