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suthern
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0 posted 2006-11-01 10:11 AM


Inspired by the brilliant words of Rod McKuen as sung by Glenn Yarbrough... and celebrating both my birthdays. *S*

I've never greeted morning with the taste of marmalade
But when I think of all the difference that you have made
I'd be remiss to not look for a way
To tell you what I never stopped to say...

Thank you so for hearing the unspoken
And thank you for the way that you replied
For you gave to me rebirth
With the sweetest sound on earth
I knew then it was my soul that you spied

Thank you for the moments you created
The difficult you seemed to do with ease
But I know the cost you paid
For the heaven that you made
You shed heart's blood to pay the piper's fee

Thank you, too, for wrapping me in sunlight
When bitter winds would have torn me apart
As I face another year
I would like to tell you, dear
I'll love you all my life with all my heart.

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1 posted 2006-11-01 10:30 AM


I always have had a special place in my heart for suthern gals
This is 1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2006-11-01 12:11 PM


suthern
I can't say you will get better because you are now the best.

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3 posted 2006-11-01 12:42 PM


Beloved one this is utterly beautiful and yes I agree with Seymore you are always the best. Happy Birthday darling one, and thank you for all that you are. love you lady
Love you always
like you forever
Mushy
x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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4 posted 2006-11-01 01:08 PM




This is beautiful!!
AND a very Happy Birthday to you!!

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5 posted 2006-11-01 01:39 PM


Happy birthday beautiful lady!  And this?  Beyond beautiful sweetie!
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6 posted 2006-11-01 01:57 PM


Happy Birthday lovie.

And there's something about marmalade, huh?

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7 posted 2006-11-01 04:03 PM


ok, its about time *foot tap tap tap*
its about time I knew what day your birthday is....well this birthday that is, I know the other one *knowing look*

love you lady, this is beautiful and so are you

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8 posted 2006-11-01 04:12 PM


oh yes...with all the foot tapping I forgot...Happy Birthday *s* with all my heart *hugs*
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9 posted 2006-11-01 05:09 PM


Laura Ruth, this is incredible.

You sometimes doubt your own poetic gifts, but lemme tell ya, after this one, you won't ever get away with THAT around me! And does this one get tucked into my library? Oh yes, and thank you, birthday girl....

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10 posted 2006-11-01 05:23 PM


Happy Birthday, Ruth...thanks for gifting poetry!  
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11 posted 2006-11-02 09:13 AM


As I have said before, you are as "Belle" on the inside as you are on the inside!

Love your poetry, your spirit, and you!

I hope your birthday was a gloriously memorable one ~ as will be the remainder of those in your new birthday year! So mote it be!

Giving you a warm, loving birthday hug,

Linda

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12 posted 2006-11-02 11:04 AM


SweetSuthernGal~
Yes ... one poetic year older ... better and more beautiful~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Kethry
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13 posted 2006-11-03 03:33 AM


suthern love,

When I've read this again after you've moved on I realise what a gift you are to me and what a difference you made.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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14 posted 2006-11-17 03:27 PM


Thank you all so very much for receiving this so kindly... it's special to me... so are you. *S*

And Keth... thank you for your faith that the first verse would be there when I needed it to be. *S*

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15 posted 2006-11-22 09:54 AM


suthern,

   Finally grabbed a moment to read and reply.  and talk about "inspiration"... you are one!  Totally enjoyed your lovely poem!

Happy Thanksgiving, suthern.

hugs,
misC

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16 posted 2006-11-23 01:23 AM


Suthern, When you write, I read. Beautiful... martyjo
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17 posted 2006-11-23 07:14 AM


Happy belated birthdays..I try to read you whenever I am able to catch you...glad I did this morning!


M

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